Follow the sun, you will feel the heat.
Tread the ice, biting cold in your feet.
Splash of a sundown, darkness abound.
The breeze will breeze through in a wink.
Where will you go? In sand you will sink.
Stay – you’ll loose; run – e’thing you’ll leave.
What is it that you want? The time is timeless.
Do you want to know? It is what it always is;
Sun will go down; ice’ll melt, only to freeze.
Where will you go? Do you think you know?
Tread the ice, biting cold in your feet.
Splash of a sundown, darkness abound.
The breeze will breeze through in a wink.
Where will you go? In sand you will sink.
Stay – you’ll loose; run – e’thing you’ll leave.
What is it that you want? The time is timeless.
Do you want to know? It is what it always is;
Sun will go down; ice’ll melt, only to freeze.
Where will you go? Do you think you know?
8 comments:
Its official.. I just DON'T get poetry!
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Poor attempt at rhyming Thakur!
I wish i was born a few years ago to take lessons from his greatness self T.S.Elliot. cant do much about it. tried my best. a name rather than anonymous would have been good.
I keep getting back to this one. Really appeals to me.
Thank you.
TE
It's only this one life... so I guess we are meant to go on till we find the rainbow at the end of the road.
And yes, in case we're not meant to see it, the journey should be colourful enough to make up for its absence.
It'll all fall into place. :)
Nice and thought-provoking...
Debarshini, that's an interesting interpretation. Only when we find the rainbow the journey is ending. Sounds like the book the ALCHEMIST, which I know Pushkar must have read. Guess life is about following our dreams?
Thakur: after i jokingly say Quagmires is a poor attempt at rhyming, it appears, you stop writing altogether!
hahaha..it is definitley not that..you know me..not many things deter me..definitley not being out of rhyme..issue here is time..i am so choked for time and also choked for inspiration...later beiung the major reason...lots of inspiration has been taken away...what can i do? but i will start writing back..
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